
Establishing shot
Close up
Sticking a polaroid picture of a place she has visited to a wall with other photos she has taken on it.
Close up of her face
Wide shot
Stepping back and looking at her pictures then picking up bag.
mid shot
laptop on desk. Girl walks past and turns the screen so we can see that she is looking at a website about abandoned buildings. She closes the laptop.
Tracking mid shot
Walking dog next to fence and talking to her friend on the phone
Girl: I know what I’m doing. I’ve done this before. It isn’t dangerous here anymore. Relax I’ve got Timmy with me
Tracking shot of dog
Wide shot of the girl tying the dog to a fence
Close up of dog barking at her as she walks away.
Close up of hands picking up padlock and close up of her face
mid shot
her legs jumping over a fence
wide shot
girl at entrance of one of the buildings
wide shot of room in darkness
torch switches on as she looks around the room
wide shot of her back as she is exploring and then something flickers past the camera and she turns round alarmed.
mid shot of dog running in
close up of her face looking relieved
tracking shot of her bending down to pat the dog
close up of face
girl: I thought I tied you up
over the shoulder shot
looks out of the tunnel and sees the gate swinging open
hears another sound behind her turns around
long shot of her walking back into tunnel
close up
torch starts flickering and she hits it
POV shot
light flickers back on and she sees a pristine baby blanket and picks it up
mid shot
dog is scared
mid shot
she starts throwing the tennis ball for the dog
wide shot
dog comes back without the ball
close up tracking
it rolls round the corner
mid shot
she goes to investigate
wide shot
dog runs out
close up
girl: Timmy!
Sighs walks back into tunnel
Close Up
Focus is on dripping water, before being redirected to the girl as she steps in.
Wide Shot
Follows behind the girl’s shoulder as she walks into this room, she’s breathing fairly heavily.
Close Up
Of girl’s face as she looks around.
Wide Shot
The girl hears a sudden crash and she startles, falling over.
Low angle shot
The girl falls to the ground
Cut in
The torch rolls away
Mid-shot
The girl looks out, shocked. Slowly, a thick black liquid drips down onto her face. she touches a hand to her face, looking at her fingers.
Cut In Over the Shoulder Shot
girl looks at the black sludge on her fingers
Mid Shot
she looks up.
High Angle Shot (Wide Shot)
The girl looks up at something dripping above her. Two feet approach from behind her. The girl slowly looks behind her
Extreme close up of her eyes.

ELLIE GILLINGHAM
AS MEDIA STUDIES BLOG
SCRIPT SECOND DRAFT
The story follows a girl who is interested in exploring abandoned places. She decides to visit a less explored location against her friend's advice. She goes alone with only her dog, who she ties up outside before she enters the site. Strange things begin to happen as she is exploring the abandoned building and she realises that her friend may have been right.